用英文给领导写建议信

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**1. Directions:**

**Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university，suggesting how to improve students' physical condition.**

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 <td> 情 景 &amp; 要 求 </td> 
 <td> 1. letter。 2&amp;3. the president of your university。 4. suggesting。 5. imporve students' physical condition。 </td> 
 <td> 1. 写作类型：书信。 2. 写信身份：大学生。 3. 信息对象：校长。 4. 交际目的：为改善学生体质提供建议。 5. 写作话题：改善学生体质。 </td> 
 <td> 1. 格式：书信（建议信）。 2. 语域：给校长的信件属于公务信函，应使用正式语体，措辞要有礼貌，客气。 3. 内容要点：a. 指出学生体质堪忧的现实问题；b. 提出改善建议。 </td> 
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**2. 知识储备**

express sb humble opinions about sth 就某事发表自己的拙见。

deteriorate v. 恶化，下降。

stunningly ad. 令人震惊地。

military training 军训。

compulsory adj. 义务的；必修的；被强制的。

It is imperative that ......有必要。

a burning issue 紧急的问题

the over-emphasis on / over-emphasis on 过度强调...... \[over- 过度，过分\] ，用于引出义在批驳的事物。

**3. 模板**

> Dear \_\_\_，
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> I am (自我介绍)，I'm writing to express my humble opinions about (某种问题).
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> (上述问题) has become a burning issue. A recent resport metions that (报道内容所展现的问题)，The root of the problem，I think，lies in (分析原因).
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> So It is imperative that (......有必要).
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> (建议一) should be compulsory for (......).
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> Meanwhile，(建议二) would be of great value for (......).
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> I hope you find the above suggestions helpful and utilize them in (......).
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> Yours faithfully,
> 
> Li Ming

**4. 外刊资料**

Climate change may be a burning issue - but election campaign tells another story. - The Guardian(卫报)

**译文：**气候文化问题迫在眉睫——而大选体现的确实另一回事。

**补充知识：**burning 意为"重要而迫切的"，a burning issue可用于表示亟待解决的紧迫问题。

In this irrational age，one example of irrationlity is the over-emphasis on winning titles，while is actually a rare occurrence. -Toronto Star(多伦多星报)

**译文：**在这个非理性的时代，荒谬之一就是过度强调赢取冠军头衔，(但)这实际是极少发生的。

**补充知识：**over表示"过度，过分"，over-emphasize on / the over-emphasis on意为"过度强调......"，用于引出意在批驳的事物。

**5 范文**

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 <td style="width:544px;"> Dear Sir， ① I am a junior/senior student in this university. ② I'm writing to express my humble opinions about physical health problem among college students.&nbsp; ① Students' deteriorating physical condition has become a burning issue.&nbsp;② A recent report mentions that there are stunningly 6000 times of medical treatment for 3500 students in&nbsp;one new student' military training.&nbsp;③ The root of the problem，I think，lies in the over-emphasis on test scores.&nbsp;④ So it is imperative that the exam-driven system be reformed and the value of health be stressed ⑤ Physical education should be compulsory for all students.&nbsp;&nbsp;⑥ Meanwhile，opportunities for students to exercise，such as sports meeting，would be of great value for students. ① I do hope you find the above suggestions helpful and utilize them in our university. &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Yours faithfully， &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Li Ming </td> 
 <td style="width:420px;"> 尊敬的先生， ①我是本校大三/大四的学生。&nbsp;②我写信时为就大学生的健康问题提出自己的拙见。 ①学生日益糟糕的身体素质已经变成一个紧急的问题。&nbsp;② 最近有报道称在一次新军训中，3500名学生的就医次数令人震惊地达到了6000次。③ 我认为问题的根源是在于过度强调考试分数。&nbsp;④ 因此有必要改革应试体系，强调健康的价值。&nbsp;⑤ 应将体育设置为所有学生的必修课。⑥ 因外，诸如运动会等锻炼机会对学生来说会是价值非凡的。 ① 真心希望您觉得上述建议有用并在我校予以实施。 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 诚挚的， &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 李明&nbsp; </td> 
 <td style="width:205px;"> 1. 引言部分：自我介绍并表明写作目的。① 自我介绍。 ② 表明写作的目的；就大学生的健康问题说明看法。 2.&nbsp;主体部分：指出学生体质问题的具体表现，分析原因并提出建议①②指除学生身体素质不佳的现状并以数据论证。&nbsp;③分析问题产生的原因：过度强调考试分数。④⑤⑥提出建议：设置体育为必修课并为学生积极提供体育锻炼机会。&nbsp; 3. 结尾部分:①表达期待，希望建议被采纳。 </td> 
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