于杉老师大作文模板

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### 于杉老师大作文 ###

*  幕布笔记和思维导图
 *  第一段模板 —— 描述图表+翻译标题
 *   *  【静】2016 - 某高校学生旅游目的调查 - \[竞争激烈\]
     *  【静】2013 - 某高校学生兼职情况 - \[一超多强\]
     *  【静表格】2012 - 某公司员工工作满意度调查 - \[双强对立\]
     *  【动】2017 - 我国博物馆数量和参观人数 - \[标准\]
     *  【动】2019 - 本科毕业生去向统计- \[变化\]
 *  第二段模板 —— 引出主题 + 陈述原因
 *   *  主题如何看！
     *  原因怎么写!
 *  第三段 —— 提建议 + 展望未来
 *  框架篇

# 幕布笔记和思维导图 #

这里把 [幕布笔记][Link 1] 和思维导图也放出来，学弟学妹们加油，祝福学长我能上岸吧  
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# 第一段模板 —— 描述图表+翻译标题 #

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静态图(无时间变化)：  
  
①According to the chart, there **is/was** the most portion of A taking up XX(%) in 标题.  
  
②At the same time, there **is/was** the second most portion of B counting for XX(%).  
  
③C, D, E/other items make up XX(%) **in turn(依次)**.

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动态图(时间变化)：  
  
①According to the chart, A had **risen/declined** from XX(%) to XX(%) during the period of XX年 and XX年.  
  
②At the same time, B had **risen/declined** from XX(o)to XX(%) during the same period.  
  
③Obviously, these **is/was** a distinct change in 标题.

第一段最后一句要分析！

*  趋势相同,同升同降：the trend of museums went towards the same way to one of visitors.
 *  趋势相反： the trend of urban population went towards the opposite/opposing way to one of rural population.

数据！— 会看单位！十万、百万、一亿、%…

<table> 
 <thead> 
  <tr> 
   <th>数量</th> 
   <th>描述</th> 
   <th>描述</th> 
  </tr> 
 </thead> 
 <tbody> 
  <tr> 
   <td>100</td> 
   <td>hundred</td> 
   <td>百</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000</td> 
   <td>thousand</td> 
   <td>千</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,0</td> 
   <td>ten thousand</td> 
   <td>一万</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,00</td> 
   <td>hundred hundred / 0.1 million</td> 
   <td>十万</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,000</td> 
   <td>million</td> 
   <td>百万</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,000,0</td> 
   <td>ten million</td> 
   <td>千万</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,000,00</td> 
   <td>hundred million / 100 million / 0.1 billion</td> 
   <td>一亿</td> 
  </tr> 
  <tr> 
   <td>1,000,000,000</td> 
   <td>one billion</td> 
   <td>百亿</td> 
  </tr> 
 </tbody> 
</table>

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## 【静】2016 - 某高校学生旅游目的调查 - \[竞争激烈\] ##

标题：**某高校学生旅游目的调查**  
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①According to the chart, there **is/was** the most portion of `写图表上比例最大的部分的描述`appreciating/seeing/viewing/enjoying scenery/landscape taking up `比例`37% in `标题`a survey of travel purpose of students in a **certain(某一)** university.

*  标题：倒着写 —— A of B of C（C的B的A）  
    **某高校学生旅游目的调查**：a survey of travel purpose of students in a **certain(某一)** university

②At the same time, there **is/was** the second most portion of of `图表上比例第2大的部分的描述`relieving/easing/lessening/alleviating stress/pressure counting for `比例`33%.

③`其余部分描述`Making more friends, developing independence and others make up 9%, 6%, 15% in turn.

## 【静】2013 - 某高校学生兼职情况 - \[一超多强\] ##

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①According to the chart, there is the most portion of A taking up XX(%) in `(标题)某高校学生兼职情况`the **picture(情况)** of part-time jobs of students in a certain university.

②Conversely, there is the stable portion of of `大一,大二,大三学生`freshmen, sophomores, junior counting for 67.77%, 71.13%, 71.93%, 88.24% in turn.

③The number of senior students taking part-time jobs is more than other college students.

## 【静表格】2012 - 某公司员工工作满意度调查 - \[双强对立\] ##

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看**表格图**的顺序：

*  先竖着看, 看谁占比例最大
 *  再横着看, 看最大的比例属于谁

描述年龄区间：

*  40岁以下：under the age of 40
 *  40~50岁：between the age of 40 and 50
 *  50岁以上：over the age of 50

占比例：  
**account for  
count for  
occupy  
take up  
make up  
represent** \+ XX%

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①According to the chart, there is the most portion of employees over the age of 50 taking up 40% in `(标题)某公司员工工作满意度调查`the survey of satisfaction of employees in a certain company.

②However, there is the most portion of employees between the age of 41 and 50 counting for 64% in dissatisfaction.

> 此处可以不写第三句话了（前面字数足够）  
> ③C, D, E/other items make up XX(%) in turn(依次).

## 【动】2017 - 我国博物馆数量和参观人数 - \[标准\] ##

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①According to the chart, the number of museums had **risen** from `数量变化`4165 to 4692 during the period of `年份变化`2013 and 2015.

②At the same time, the number of visitors had risen from 637.8 million to 781.1 million during the same period.

③Obviously, the number of visitors and museums had both risen in China.

## 【动】2019 - 本科毕业生去向统计- \[变化\] ##

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①According to the chart, taking jobs / getting jobs(就业) had declined from 68.1% to 60.7% during the period of 2013 and 2018.

②Conversely, pursuing higher education(升学) had risen from 26.3% to 34.0% and starting own business(创业) had also risen from 1.3% to 2.6% during the same period.

③Obviously, the trend of taking jobs was an opposite way to that of pursuing higher education and starting own business.

# 第二段模板 —— 引出主题 + 陈述原因 #

①These figures/digits illustrate a **phenomenon** that 主题(一句话).

*  主题句型：people pay more attention to …

②There are several factors contributory to this topic.

*  这句话是过渡句。

③ First, **as(随着)** the **economic performance(经济状况)** is improving at the faster pace, more people focus on the **material aspects(物质方面)** and **practical benefits(实际利益)**, which are the necessary demand of technological advances and better **infrastructure(基础设施)** in modern times.

*  首先, 随着经济状况改善地速度非常快, 更多的人关注物质方面和实际利益, 这是技术进步和当代更好的基础设施的需求。

④Second, when people reach the stable **living standards(生活水平)**, people begin to take more elements into consideration, specially higher education, quality, feature, traditional legacy and others.

*  第二, 当人们到达了稳定的生活水平, 人们就开始考虑更多要素, 尤其是更好的教育, 质量, 特征, 和传统文化等。

⑤Third, in diverse and individualized world, young people are likely to take different attitudes toward fierce competition and then place a value on shining and significant capabilities, such as 主题词 for dealing with increased social pressure.

*  第三, 在多变和个性化的世界里, 年轻人想要对竞争采取不同的态度, 而且强调不同的能力, 鉴于更多的社会压力。

## 主题如何看！ ##

*  **静态图**：谁占份额最大, 谁就是主题
 *  **动态图**：谁变化最大, 谁就是主题

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主题：特色

*  consumers/people pay more attention to the feature (and service) of restaurants now.

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主题：博物馆增多，参观人数增多

*  people pay more attention to visiting the museums these years.

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主题：就业减少、**升学多、创业多**

*  就业减少不好写，**升学多、创业多**好写，可以往经济上扯…
 *  graduates pay more attention to higher education and starting up own businesses.

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Fourth year students pay more attention to part-time jobs.

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主题：学生用手机学习

*  个人角度出发，可以提升个人，经济角度说积极发展好，手机很普遍

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主题：城镇人口增多

*  乡村人数减少也可以，但是城镇人口增多好写，可以往经济上扯

## 原因怎么写! ##

原因一：经济发展好, 所以物质基础好, 导致人们不是很缺钱, 所以可以追求自己的理想和目标.

*  The better economic growth becomes, the more material foundation becomes, leading to people with financial support, who are more willing to pursue individual ideals and goals.

原因二：国家有政策可以支持升学和创业。

*  The authorities focusing on this aspect issue policies, which are beneficial to it, to endorse higher education and starting up own business.

原因三：经济发展好, 科技更发达, 竞争压力大, 需要提升自己。

*  With the economic development, technology become more advanced at a fast-moving speed beyond what people could imagine, which causes fiercer competition, and therefore, people need to promote individual abilities and character, including cultures, communication and other aspects.

原因四：经济发展好, 机会也多了, 世界更加多元化, 选择的路不同

*  The modern world is occupied with all kinds of chances to offer people and in the diverse world, everyone have a lot of choices to different paths to their careers.

原因五（精神类）：从个人角度出发, 为了提升自己, 立于不败之地, 甚至成功, 只能提升自己或者寻找机会, 锻炼自己

*  From individual perspective, people focus more on individual ideas and feelings, especially with higher living standards, leaving more room to individuals who **exercise(施展)** imagination and influence on culture, tradition, education…

# 第三段 —— 提建议 + 展望未来 #

①These reasons could demonstrate the fact that 主题句

②This will go a long way toward the future, but only when everyone is supposed to take adaptable measures to better behaviors, the society will definitely become harmonious.

*  这个情况将走很远的路, 但是只要当每个人应该采取适当的措施去优化行为, 这个社会将绝对会和谐的。

③Whatever questions we meet with **in the making(在酝酿中)**, we will come over them and pursue ideals and dreams for individuals and China.

表达观点：Viewed in my right, I am supportive of that topic with the reason that it **corresponds with(顺应)** the modern need nowadays and reflects the real desire from people who want to make themselves stronger and more successful in various fields.

# 框架篇 #

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[Link 1]: https://share.mubu.com/doc/BqCI9AE-rz
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